Drinking Alcohol taught me how to fly
Then it took away the sky....

Thursday, April 28, 2011

FFF 55 SPRING BREAK NUMBER ONE













 FLASH '55' NUMBER ONE

Bleakness descended
Void not mended
What's left from fire
Embered into nothingness

In bed at two..up at five
Now, to see how
I might survive, stay alive
With that computer untended

A  spring-break!
A Blog-break!

Not going away
Right here to stay
To read, comment,
And be sent


Into that special place
Of hope--



To help celebrate Flash Fiction Friday PROPERLY--grin! Click on Mr G

BLOGGER PEEPS
PLEASE READ
BELOW
SPRING BREAK NUMBER TWO 
ONLY 55 WORDS!!!--grin!

23 comments:

  1. Your first four lines were very touching. I hope you find that which mends and bridges.

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  2. Breaks are good and so is this 55.

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  3. Well glad that spring is breaking upon you
    obviously you are prolific in 55

    Moonie smiles 4 u

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  4. Did someone say Spring Break? Nice!(but don't spend too much time on the computer. Unplugging is good sometimes). Great 55

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  5. Great 55 Steve.
    Now, enjoy your break!
    I wish you peace!

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  6. You just came off break.
    What else you got to do?
    Got a Concert tonight?....No?
    Relax!
    Excellent 55 if you really meant it
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  7. Now I'm confused. Taking another break or just celebrating having taken one?

    - Alice

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  8. ... breaks are good ... I'm always breaks - and enjoy the rest without a PC ... and it's nice to come back ... new to discover ...
    ... for the time spring is here to enjoy in color, scent and sound ...
    have a good break-time ...

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  9. You must have a very full life. It's good to know you'll be here. Cheers. I'm glad I met you playing 55 with G-man.

    Click here for my 55

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  10. Loved your 55. We all need a break. Enjoy yours!

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  11. Very nice poem? there:) Enjoy your spring break.

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  12. The picture is lovely, and your poetic words are excellent...

    I truly appreciated my brief visit to your blog place today. Just to reconnect... and to say "Hi, I was here to visit you!"

    Blessings
    Lidj

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  13. Hey, Steve!!! It's been awhile since I stopped by! I've been busy offline. I just got back from a writer's conference. You are certainly a good writer!!! You have such a unique style and way of writing "visually", to where I actually see what you are writing! You're good! I hope you are printing off these FFFs and other works and putting them in a book or something!!!! Hope you are enjoying your spring break!!

    Blessings!


    Kimberly

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  14. I've only been posting a few times a week, to stay alive! Thanks for your kind words today. (blush)

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  15. "I've seen some hot hot places come down to smoke and ash," to quote you-know-who from the Canadian prairies.

    But I don't mean that about your blog, or post. Your embered line just reminded me about Joni.

    Happy break! I know I always love my blogging breaks.

    xo

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  16. Hi Steve,
    I missed your 55 this week. You must be on Spring Break. Have a great time. Hope to see you back playing again.

    My blog

    Cheers,
    Shanae

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  17. You have wonderful photographs and a delightfully positive attitude in your writing. I hope your having an excellent holiday.

    Thanks for your visit and very nice comments.

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  18. Okay, Steve, it's time to get back into the swing of things. We miss you. :)

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  19. And I missed this...

    Enjoy your break - hopefully it's sunny

    Moonie smiles

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  20. Hey ... you just "found" me again and now you're taking a break!! Relax, enjoy and then come back refreshed. It's fun connecting again.

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