Drinking Alcohol taught me how to fly
Then it took away the sky....

Tuesday, September 16, 2014

ACCIDENT?



courtesy: MAGPIE TALES


ACCIDENT?
(attempted Haiku)

Oh my God, I am
beginning to remember...
my dear I hit you. 

Over a trivial 
triviality we fought.
And I thought you ought

be nicer to me.
As your head hit the marble
I took to the bottle

and drank it all. 
Now your body...what to do?
(You won't feel a thing.)

--steveroni


"Morning curtains" conjures an idyllic situation/scene.  I enjoyed disturbing it a bit, almost like a child smearing up an artist's freshly painted work.


14 comments:

  1. and I have a new blog, again, address is on my profile, no I eat the same thing every morning, cereal and yogurt

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  2. Oh Steve ... you smear quite well!

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  3. ha....so when do you start writing crime books?
    smiles

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  4. Dark and terrifying ... wonderfully done Steve :-)

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  5. Its so unseemly when two women fight ...

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  6. Noooo, this is a nightmare I would want to wake up from immediately!!!!!

    Well worded, you scared me!!!

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  7. That is quite an imaginative take on woman and curtains ~ Good job Steve, smiles ~

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  8. It is curtains for her huh?....A clever take on the prompt Steve. :-)

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  9. I saw heer as lifeless too. Like the idea of it being curtains for her.

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    1. WISH I HAD thought of THAT line, Helen

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  10. Wow--a lot of domestic violence is on everyone's radar lately as it should be.

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