Drinking Alcohol taught me how to fly
Then it took away the sky....

Sunday, August 19, 2012

NUMBER SIX--GOOD AND/OR BAD


 Riding my bike
these many miles
(so far 3,000!)
I enjoy making
'poem-phrases'
which are profound
NOTHINGNESSes.

Tossing around 
some crazy thoughts,
I tried to write
meaningful words
insensibly 
sensible in
four-syllable 
lines, lines, lines,lines....

PART OF MY LIFE

From first moment 
I heard you speak,
'good' or 'bad'--I.
of two judgements,
is nothing more
--until I die.

Believed every word,
intonation,
through it all:
intoxication.

'Good'--often 'Bad'
'Bad' on 'Good' list
joke is on me.
so late in life,
discover this twist

Had I not been
horribly drunk,
damaged lives and 
whole families
or had not growled,
snarled, and--(I stunk!)
how-ever could I 
help another
in their normal
 abnormal-tees?

"Nothing...as seems"
is not so sad
good is not good
and bad hardly 
EVER so bad

--Steve E  (aka steveroni)

(Thanks to Brian 
Miller for the
'four-syllable'
inspiration!)
Image
Duality BW by Pr3t3nd3r.jpg
in DeviantArt

13 comments:

  1. haha not sure how i inspired that but hey...smiles...was great to meet you man...and def look forward to next year...smiles....there is no good or bad...there just is...

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  2. Wellll...we had brief conversation
    re 'counting certain number syllables
    in each line'...I chose four, and think
    I counted correctly.
    --Math-a-roni

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    1. Then I shall continue to write them. LOL!
      (Thank you, Izdiher.)

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    1. Been to your place. WOW! lots to think about.
      GOOD blog. Thanks for dropping by here, PROUD MARY--grin!
      PEACE!

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  5. U S You are the one that inspires many

    KUTGW

    David

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  6. You peel back layers of your life to share with us and manage to do it in four syllable lines. Are you coming close to the end of your trip?

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    1. Hey Magpie, when ya become MY age, there's LOTS of layers.
      Some are even stuck together--grin!
      Trip ends in 3 days, LOVED it, thankful for the lessons of being alone, aware, and in love with--among others--LIFE!

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  7. Firstly, I LOVE that moonlit outdoor violin with leaf, Steve!!

    Secondly, I LOVE the thought of you flying on your bike with poetic rhythms keeping you happy and in the moment.

    Thirdly, I LOVE you as the wonderful fun unique AWESOME human friend you are.

    xoxo

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  8. Violin with leaf was hand-picked by a good blogger friend.

    You are full of "loving" thoughts today, Jannie.
    Whether you believe or not, you were on my mind yesterday and again today. And now you're here.

    Guess God is telling me there's something I need to learn in your blog right...NOW!

    Thanks really--for your ever-kind words, mean a lot!
    PEACE!

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