these many miles
(so far 3,000!)
I enjoy making
'poem-phrases'
which are profound
NOTHINGNESSes.
Tossing around
some crazy thoughts,
I tried to write
meaningful words
insensibly
sensible in
four-syllable
lines, lines, lines,lines....
PART OF MY LIFE
From first moment
I heard you speak,
'good' or 'bad'--I.
of two judgements,
is nothing more
--until I die.
Believed every word,
intonation,
through it all:
intoxication.
'Good'--often 'Bad'
'Bad' on 'Good' list
joke is on me.
so late in life,
discover this twist
Had I not been
horribly drunk,
damaged lives and
whole families
or had not growled,
snarled, and--(I stunk!)
how-ever could I
help another
in their normal
abnormal-tees?
"Nothing...as seems"
is not so sad
good is not good
and bad hardly
EVER so bad
--Steve E (aka steveroni)
(Thanks to Brian
Miller for the
'four-syllable'
'four-syllable'
inspiration!)
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Duality BW by Pr3t3nd3r.jpg
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Duality BW by Pr3t3nd3r.jpg
in DeviantArt
haha not sure how i inspired that but hey...smiles...was great to meet you man...and def look forward to next year...smiles....there is no good or bad...there just is...
ReplyDeleteWellll...we had brief conversation
ReplyDeletere 'counting certain number syllables
in each line'...I chose four, and think
I counted correctly.
--Math-a-roni
Your poems make me smile.
ReplyDeleteThen I shall continue to write them. LOL!
Delete(Thank you, Izdiher.)
Good onya mate!!!
ReplyDeleteBeen to your place. WOW! lots to think about.
DeleteGOOD blog. Thanks for dropping by here, PROUD MARY--grin!
PEACE!
This is GOOD!!!
ReplyDeleteU S You are the one that inspires many
ReplyDeleteKUTGW
David
good one :)
ReplyDeleteYou peel back layers of your life to share with us and manage to do it in four syllable lines. Are you coming close to the end of your trip?
ReplyDeleteHey Magpie, when ya become MY age, there's LOTS of layers.
DeleteSome are even stuck together--grin!
Trip ends in 3 days, LOVED it, thankful for the lessons of being alone, aware, and in love with--among others--LIFE!
Firstly, I LOVE that moonlit outdoor violin with leaf, Steve!!
ReplyDeleteSecondly, I LOVE the thought of you flying on your bike with poetic rhythms keeping you happy and in the moment.
Thirdly, I LOVE you as the wonderful fun unique AWESOME human friend you are.
xoxo
Violin with leaf was hand-picked by a good blogger friend.
ReplyDeleteYou are full of "loving" thoughts today, Jannie.
Whether you believe or not, you were on my mind yesterday and again today. And now you're here.
Guess God is telling me there's something I need to learn in your blog right...NOW!
Thanks really--for your ever-kind words, mean a lot!
PEACE!