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GOOD
ADVICE
Impatient
man
said to
his guide,
"Coming
through.
Please
step aside.”
Hurriedly
speeding
along
path, to edge
of steep
cliff's ledge,
once more
he spoke,
needing to
know
just what to do
just what to do
if he fall
into chasms
during
final spasms.
"Don't
fail to turn to the right!
You'll
love the view!”
--steveroni
inspired by Anthony De Mello
Image in
DeviantArt
"Cliff Jump"
by ~SenecaR
ugh...what else can you say to an impatient man, you may can't stop him from jumping, from falling but at least, he crashed with a nice view.. ha..that's food to chew on...i'm not very patient myself..so...
ReplyDeleteI'm also very impatient.
ReplyDeleteYes, impatience can really push you into a deep deep dive, the view can be spectacular and the impact can be permanent.
ReplyDeleteI am learning to slow things down!
ReplyDeleteHowever if I get on a tear watch out-
Good advice and well written :)
I'm thinking that I really love Jessie's comment.
ReplyDeleteJESS, MISTRESS OF MISCHIEF
ReplyDeleteYou nailed it, my friend!
IZDIHER
Also I am impatient, Iz. Peeps tell me to "practice being satisfied"...or practice "trusting God" to cure impatience.
With me, KNOWING how to do something is easy. DOING it is not!
CLAUDIA
Just remember,'friend-girl'...
"FOR BEAUTIFUL SIGHT,
TURN TO THE RIGHT!"
smiles...i like that...when you are ready to jump make sure you take the time to enjoy the view...impatience def leads to things that are not much fun...
ReplyDeleteOh I am on my way...
ReplyDeleteBut is the view on my right or your right?
RAINFIELD62
ReplyDelete(I got tired of "61")
Re comment--LOL! You ALWAYS trying to complicate things? Whose 'right or left'. Or, like, "WHOSE" right or wrong'?
BRIAN
Yup! How often I rush to get somewhere, and really miss what God meant me to see. Most of the time???
Rush, rush...hurry, hurry. So many great insights were found while lazing away time observing life around us...watching an apple fall from a tree.
ReplyDeleteReminds me of the Fool of the tarot..dancing along the cliff's edge with eye to the sky. You couldn't have used a better image! Loved it
ReplyDeleteI am impatient too ~ But I won't walk into the edge and jump ~ heights scare me ~
ReplyDeleteIZZY
ReplyDeleteJust this morning I read: “to live long, live slowly”
--Cicero (Might not be exact—my memory, ya know?--grin!)
KRISTIN
Jessie's comment was INSPIRED...we could 'stop' right there. “spectacular view, impact—permanent!)
MAGPIE
Just wrote above, a Cicero quote, “To live long, live slowly!”
NATASHA
...Thank you! I have BEEN that “Fool of the tarot!” You might have guessed—grin!
HEAVEN
Man repaired our chimney (imagine—in South Florida?) this morning and asked me to climb up and help for a minute. I could NOT!
Wrote comment on your post, I think it did not publish. Maybe God thought my words were too sexy for an old man—grin!
I think there may be something like "informed impatience" that is the most direct route to the goal, but undertaken with map in hand. Thus the cliff is avoided.
ReplyDeleteMost people today are too impatient..When you have to wait, it may prevent an accident from happening.
ReplyDeleteWhen I first looked at this post and saw the man going over the cliff I immediately thought, "He's a gonner."
Yes people need to learn patience, I was taught as a child, that it is a virtue, and I believe that.
Impatience can take you on a dive...and it does not solve anything :)Nice write :)
ReplyDeleteVery clever! At least someone's in the moment! K.
ReplyDeleteCool..great advice to the impatient man!
ReplyDeleteWell, at least he won't have to wait very long for the landing!
ReplyDeleteCracking up at Mama Zen...
ReplyDeleteAnyway, I'm much more patient than I used to be. It really is a virtue, just like momma said. = )
Love your rhythm and rhyme here, steve...!
ReplyDeleteDD
ReplyDelete“...rhythm and rhyme..”
Right now I'd rather some R&R.
Thank you.
LAURIE KOLP
Mommas always seem to know. How DO they do that?--grin!
Yup! Mama Zen, is ON THE BALL again...still!
MAMA ZEN
Read this yesterday, and still laughing! Thanks.
HEMA
YESSS good advice!...YESTERDAY, VERY good AA Peep-friend about age 60, was speeding on motorcycle on Interstate I-75 one mile from my house. Motorcycle is totaled. George is DEAD.
Sr Rose Gertrude in Grade 1, St Dominic School, said many times, “Haste makes waste”!
MANICDDAILY
Wonder if that “moment” is what Buddha meant with word Enlightenment?
AYALA
Yep, read a couple of my responses here.
You'll see how RIGHT you are!
Thank you.
CRYSTAL MARY
Patience is a Virtue
Also is common sense.
I believe neither of these are 'learned', rather are gifts from God. Because SO many of us have neither.
PATTIKEN
“Informed impatience”? WOW! That's a new one for me. Dontcha know? By the time I've looked at a map,
I heard myself go S P L A T !! on the place beneath...grin!
Hey friend :)
ReplyDeleteI have a story to share today....like your poem here....
the sorrow i felt last i wrote, in grief...well, i turned RIGHT and today...LOVE THE VIEW.
:) WELL SAID Steve E
(confused: you will have to read the story on my blog today...i think you will like it.)
have I mentioned to you I love how you write from the heart. Thanks for sharing your talents and your healing.
mile
MILE 191
ReplyDeleteYa know Stacie, I marvel to see how God works in healing you. Seems so slow, I bet, but His way is the right way--just ask anyone--grin!
I'm very glad we stayed friends for these years!
Bless you.