BENDING TIME
by Celestial Painter @ deviantart
Time in San Francisco...Saturday 8 PM
Time in Islamabad...Sunday 8 AM
I am a student/proponent of time warping,
bending. TWO 160-character pieces
I'm submitting to Monkey Man for this
Saturday-Sunday game of his. The titles are counted
as part of the 160 characters, if that is allowable:
TIME
The topic of 'time'
has been on my mind
since I was a little child.
Years ago, it drove me wild
I discuss this with my wife
She says “Go, enjoy life”
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The topic of 'time'
has been on my mind
since I was a little child.
Years ago, it drove me wild
I discuss this with my wife
She says “Go, enjoy life”
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ON THE OTHER SIDE OF THE WORLD
Your tomorrow arrives
before his today has ended.
which implies, that your sweet eyes
would see roses, before they're sended.
--Steve E
--Steve E
We live in different time zones don't we ?Logged in saw your post on top of my blog side bar -- published four minutes ago ,clicked and found 3rd Sept. -- well it is 4th Sep and Sunday here and the time is 9.20 am.
ReplyDeletehey roses are good any time right? smiles. yes, enjoy life more than counting the moments, they slip through your fingers and you lose count any way, of master wiser bard...speaking of which it is time for bed...smiles.
ReplyDeleteKAVITA:
ReplyDeleteThere's an old song, goes like this:
"Two different worlds,
we live in two different worlds..."
Ever hear it?
You are one FAST Girl-Peep! Thanks!
PEACE
hi steve! it's good to "see" you again...and i love these, i don't get the meme thing you are doing, meaning the rules but this is great.... loved the time thingy and the word "sended"-made me smile anyway. ;)
ReplyDeletexoxo
It is a strange fat world.One part it is having night and on other it's noon time. You keep track of time. Which is so cool.I am very bad in it.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem.
I love that second one!
ReplyDeleteLove your second time-warp! Well done...
ReplyDeleteGreat double 160, Peep. I always say...Time is God. Thanks for playing.
ReplyDeletelove the idea
ReplyDeletethoughtful.
ReplyDeletethanks for sharing.
Hello Steve, what a grand occupation you have.;) In Denmark we have a famous violinist, Nikolaj Znaider, maybe you know off him.;)
ReplyDeleteAs for time - it is fragile and endless, yet it is firm and fleeting, a term of total contradiction.;)
Thank you so much for your visit and very poignant comment.;)
xoxo
I enjoyed both of your perspectives on time. I often find myself pondering time...which probably isn't my best use of it. :)
ReplyDeleteWife says 'go enjoy life'....that is wishful thinking :)))))
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