courtesy: MAGPIE TALES
ACCIDENT?
(attempted Haiku)
(attempted Haiku)
Oh my God, I am
beginning to remember...
my dear I hit you.
Over a trivial
triviality we fought.
And I thought you ought
be nicer to me.
As your head hit the marble
I took to the bottle
and drank it all.
Now your body...what to do?
(You won't feel a thing.)
--steveroni
"Morning curtains" conjures an idyllic situation/scene. I enjoyed disturbing it a bit, almost like a child smearing up an artist's freshly painted work.
--steveroni
"Morning curtains" conjures an idyllic situation/scene. I enjoyed disturbing it a bit, almost like a child smearing up an artist's freshly painted work.
Steve
ReplyDeleteand I have a new blog, again, address is on my profile, no I eat the same thing every morning, cereal and yogurt
ReplyDeleteInteresting tale Steve.
ReplyDeleteOh Steve ... you smear quite well!
ReplyDeleteha....so when do you start writing crime books?
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oops....thats ...scary...!
ReplyDeleteDark and terrifying ... wonderfully done Steve :-)
ReplyDeleteIts so unseemly when two women fight ...
ReplyDeleteNoooo, this is a nightmare I would want to wake up from immediately!!!!!
ReplyDeleteWell worded, you scared me!!!
That is quite an imaginative take on woman and curtains ~ Good job Steve, smiles ~
ReplyDeleteIt is curtains for her huh?....A clever take on the prompt Steve. :-)
ReplyDeleteI saw heer as lifeless too. Like the idea of it being curtains for her.
ReplyDeleteWISH I HAD thought of THAT line, Helen
DeleteWow--a lot of domestic violence is on everyone's radar lately as it should be.
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