This is a re-worked poem from several
years ago--I wrote then under an alias...
LOVE BIRDS
rode with the wind
flew out in style
brother, I've sinned,
loved every mile
we slept on
beach, bench,
tall building beams.
down, to mountain streams
flew with feathered beaks
to quench thirst, then we
soared over highest peaks.
breathless, stopped to rest,
flapped wings, other things,
there built our love nest
there exchanged our rings.
oh my love, you remember
moments, we held no bars,
sweetest nights of December
full moon dressed in stars?
you wondered then
if we'd ever
be human again--
whether we could sever
ourselves from
living and loving
in birdland...
away from fantasy life we
flew
flew
for that's what true love birds
do
--steveroni
I remember my own flights to the moon ... Lovely poem, Steve ... Always, cat ... don't forget me, eh?
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Captain Redbeard--aka, Captain WHITE BEARD (since 2004).....
great closing lines....and you know we only have to let go of that dream and fantasy accepting our humaness if we want...love is that powerful. smiles.
ReplyDeletehappy saturday brother.
Brian.
DeleteFor me, the only way to let go of dream and fantasy, is to fill the hole made as they left--with reality. With any character defect, if I practice the opposite (virtue), God can take away the problem behavior.
One thing is saying/writing it
Another is DOING it. HO-HO-HO!
Thanks fo inspiring comment, my friend...It's 20 minutes from Sunday...OMIGOSH! SEPTEMBER...Well, I wish you Merry Christmas!
Love is so powerful, it flows us to the moon.
ReplyDeleteThe moon...and beyond, Sir Rainfeld.
DeletePeace.
Oh, those wonderful love birds!
ReplyDeleteMagical poem!
Guess, I'm off to the moon now :)
Loved it!
Margie, I love your ENTHUSIASM!!! Thank you. Next people to the moon will find you there, smiling...happy...as always
DeletePEACE and LIGHT, Margie
nice... i like the idea of taking a bit of that fantasy with you into reality and everyday... that's what true lovebirds do - right? smiles
ReplyDeleteClaudia, I do believe you understood completely this post.
DeleteThank you for that, and more!
Love it!
ReplyDeleteJohn! thank you. (I think you'd say "love it!" if a blogger but sneezed on here
ReplyDeletesuch as
A-A-A...CHOOOOOOOOO!)