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Passing Place -- steven kelly
THE WHITE-COLD MILE
Oh,
the cold, freezing chill,
new
sign on weathered post,
snow
pockets white on hill,
I'm
ready for the roast...
One
remaining expectation
while
shivering, shuddering,
thinking,
riding on this, the
final
day-- my cremation.
Here
is the place
of lasting passing--
from
earth to space
Riding
past "Passing Place"
traveling
through blasting
northern
Decembrrrr air,
under
helmet, frozen hair!
Accompanying thoughts
of
a huge pyre, I
"see" my
laughing self happily
sitting
there in
splendid, raging fire.
--steveroni
"The Cremation of Sam McGee",
by Robert W Service
by Robert W Service
influenced this short rhyme.
Identifying thoroughly with the
Identifying thoroughly with the
poem's protagonist, I continue
loving to be warm.
haha ok a little morbid brother...but i think i'd rather be warm on the pyre than have frozen hair, just saying...smiles...and if you are going to go might as well make it a hot time in the old town tonight...i think i want a viking funeral...set the boat on fire and push me out...smiles.
ReplyDelete"...splendid raging fire." I feel that line.
ReplyDeletenicely written......and thanks for sharing your words
ReplyDeletesnow pockets white on hill....loved your eerie gothic tale..x
ReplyDeleteHa ha! Thanks for that! :)
ReplyDeleteha - now you scare me a bit... oy... haven't made up my mind so far...probably i don't really care anymore then...ha...smiles
ReplyDeleteLove how you saw the snow pockets ... don't think I'm ready for this journey you describe so beautifully .. quite yet!!
ReplyDeleteI like your upbeat attitude, Steve...they say Frida Kahlo sat up in the midst of her crematory flames and smiled...
ReplyDeletei loved this... so glad i wandered by today via another blog. i didn't know you were blogging again, dear man. much love to you, steve. xox
ReplyDeleteI can see you so vividly.
ReplyDeleteEspecially your frozen hair.
Sure puts a different spin on being warmed by a fire!
ReplyDeleteA great read!
ReplyDeleteGo, Steve go :)