tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-768410634619342671.post401169229542400308..comments2024-02-23T05:16:23.918-05:00Comments on The Fourth Dimension: SEVENTEEN SYLLABLESsteveronihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04010875412308487592noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-768410634619342671.post-32470426622620486792013-11-17T04:59:46.650-05:002013-11-17T04:59:46.650-05:00I find this very atmospheric, a great style of wri...I find this very atmospheric, a great style of writing.Johnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05831017007089393889noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-768410634619342671.post-67718795746313785502013-11-16T08:33:47.731-05:002013-11-16T08:33:47.731-05:00till dawn - brought me to reality. sigh.till dawn - brought me to reality. sigh.Yuvikahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12871366730928566530noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-768410634619342671.post-2837303575400952922013-11-16T05:44:38.792-05:002013-11-16T05:44:38.792-05:00amazingamazing♥●• İzdihër •●♥https://www.blogger.com/profile/07824597580762719194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-768410634619342671.post-50939219762906403022013-11-16T05:39:48.787-05:002013-11-16T05:39:48.787-05:00I like the inclusion of sounds in so many of these...I like the inclusion of sounds in so many of these.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-768410634619342671.post-59405092611615443962013-11-15T22:37:05.416-05:002013-11-15T22:37:05.416-05:00I like the first one as I remember catching snowfl...I like the first one as I remember catching snowflakes on my tongue nice memories there..these are <br />all wonderfully crafted...<br /><br />Peace & Light my friend..Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-768410634619342671.post-49020604285969972702013-11-15T14:48:22.361-05:002013-11-15T14:48:22.361-05:00So well done and the last one - I know that feelin...So well done and the last one - I know that feeling...<br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-768410634619342671.post-6118062404875264692013-11-15T14:48:12.164-05:002013-11-15T14:48:12.164-05:00there is presence of the day-to-day in this series...there is presence of the day-to-day in this series. and some playful rhyming as well. wonderful work. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-768410634619342671.post-82222859143436007462013-11-15T11:49:15.986-05:002013-11-15T11:49:15.986-05:00more fun to catch raindrops and snowflakes on tong...<i> more fun to catch raindrops and snowflakes on tongue,<br />than to catch a football... </i><br />I just realized.. yeah. True<br /><br />last line.. until the reality.. <br />simply beautiful Jyoti Mishrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01794675170127168298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-768410634619342671.post-45875546293998482472013-11-15T11:45:45.958-05:002013-11-15T11:45:45.958-05:00Great! You really managed to capture a moment, a s...Great! You really managed to capture a moment, a scene, in each sentence. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-768410634619342671.post-51479836206056796372013-11-15T04:22:03.120-05:002013-11-15T04:22:03.120-05:00Reality catches up with us...you expressed it so w...Reality catches up with us...you expressed it so well!Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-768410634619342671.post-53469700729587623622013-11-14T23:41:23.799-05:002013-11-14T23:41:23.799-05:00Mystic-Mom. Wondering if your blog is blocked fro...Mystic-Mom. Wondering if your blog is blocked from public access...I cannot get there from here (not the first time I ever said THAT--grin!). If it's proper procedure, I'm asking you for a link.<br />Thanks, Ma'am!<br /><br />PS I even tried from your comment on others' blogs, no luck!steveronihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04010875412308487592noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-768410634619342671.post-72877648169451106342013-11-14T23:32:55.956-05:002013-11-14T23:32:55.956-05:00Your comment is SO NICE--and appreciated, Gay. Tha...Your comment is SO NICE--and appreciated, Gay. Thanks!steveronihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04010875412308487592noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-768410634619342671.post-80161163535657412912013-11-14T21:55:54.228-05:002013-11-14T21:55:54.228-05:00I would always know this is yours - each one has s...I would always know this is yours - each one has sound, has music and you wonderfully tied unlikely things together to transition that music and make it your very own. Wonderful.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-768410634619342671.post-90735992966110609542013-11-14T21:02:07.850-05:002013-11-14T21:02:07.850-05:00Very, very nice. I can relate all to well to the l...Very, very nice. I can relate all to well to the last one. :-)Kate Solohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06703901149715024366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-768410634619342671.post-14151047580503435562013-11-14T20:26:04.502-05:002013-11-14T20:26:04.502-05:00Very nicely done, like the first one best!Very nicely done, like the first one best!Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-768410634619342671.post-78298530437633723882013-11-14T19:35:42.648-05:002013-11-14T19:35:42.648-05:00Nice specially the first one, snowflakes on tongue...Nice specially the first one, snowflakes on tongue ~ Good to see you Steve ~ Take care ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-768410634619342671.post-2699871612458544712013-11-14T18:38:33.971-05:002013-11-14T18:38:33.971-05:00Hi Steve...I agree about raindrops on tongue. Def...Hi Steve...I agree about raindrops on tongue. Definitely that is more fun!! And yes, sometimes drinking puts things out of sight...but they always surface again tomorrow. One can never REALLY escape reality. Great "American sentences."<br />Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-768410634619342671.post-3073771158953799712013-11-14T17:50:58.639-05:002013-11-14T17:50:58.639-05:00An everlasting dawn brought reality, I take it bec...An everlasting dawn brought reality, I take it because you never let go of it once it came. Darkness never entered your world again. <br />You were not talking about me in the shower because that is not pretty and you'd never know it's singing. A Plain Observerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03741520771592669741noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-768410634619342671.post-20213224797910094542013-11-14T17:42:55.999-05:002013-11-14T17:42:55.999-05:00my son would beg to differ on the football...ha......my son would beg to differ on the football...ha...we have to throw it every day...rain or shine...inside or outside.....whats up with all the noise too, the mower and the plane...lol...and i hate to think of all the behind the scenes crunching needed to process our processing...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-768410634619342671.post-70250744370896026512013-11-14T16:47:53.323-05:002013-11-14T16:47:53.323-05:00Steve.. love the catching rain and snow... but the...Steve.. love the catching rain and snow... but the real one catching my attention was alas the last one..brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-768410634619342671.post-51949435091483126362013-11-14T16:16:36.117-05:002013-11-14T16:16:36.117-05:00tristand und isolde...nice.. always happy when i d...tristand und isolde...nice.. always happy when i discover something german...smiles.... and yeah....catching rain or snow is def. more fun than catching a football...smiles... and that last one...ugh... reminded me of my dad...drinking def. puts truth out of sight..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.com